“Grabs your attention!”

—naricorn rated: 3.0

“A Little Convoluted, but Has Lots of Promise!”

—haeun_logos rated: 2.5

“Interesting premise!”

—LoseThatLeftSock rated: 3.5

“Unsure at first but has potential”

—naricorn rated: 2.5

“Sudden shift”

—naricorn rated: 3.0

“great tension”

—van rated: 3.5

“Goes a direction I didn't expect at all!”

—nenatia rated: 2.5

“Unique read--want to understand Ayn more”

—naricorn rated: 4.0

“Ayn Know Better”

—cereed27 rated: 1.0

“Heartrending narrative”

—hadiyyyah rated: 3.5

“Nicely crafted, nicely told”

—GeoB rated: 4.0

“Hard to Read (In the Best Way Possible)”

—haeun_logos rated: 4.5

“An excellent portrayal of hysteria and desperation”

—van rated: 4.0

“A harrowing encounter between fear, guilt, and certain death.”

—Hyba rated: 4.5

“Haunting--this piece is a gem.”

—naricorn rated: 5.0

“Interesting but check grammar!”

—metafrick rated: 3.0

“Unexpected, but Great!”

—haeun_logos rated: 4.0

“Well written, but not a story.”

—cereed27 rated: 1.5