“Powerful and intimate”

—van rated: 4.0

“Like a story blueprint”

—Thedude3445 rated: 3.0

“Could use some work, but it's good.”

—Rose_Platter rated: 1.5

“Quaint little piece”

—naricorn rated: 3.5

“Needs paragraph separations”

—KatieWenn rated: 3.0

“Tender and Gently Heartbreaking”

—haeun_logos rated: 4.0

“Clear prose and engrossing concept!”

—naricorn rated: 4.5

“Strong storytelling”

—baileym rated: 4.5

“Please give me more I beg you”

—procrastinator_extraordinaire rated: 5.0

“Disturbing in the best way! Work on retaining momentum.”

—oc rated: 4.0

“Intriguing piece, needs more details”

—beco99 rated: 4.0

“Your characters feel alive”

—whatdoyouneed rated: 4.5

“Poppy is fourteen-year-old me”

—van rated: 3.0

“Needs an arc”

—GeoB rated: 1.0

“The possibility for development”

—hadiyyyah rated: 2.5

“Interesting in some parts”

—whatdoyouneed rated: 3.0

“Villainous main character? Interesting power? I'm in (but please work on the pacing).”

—nenatia rated: 3.0

“Could use more specifics and make it clearer what the story's about in the beginning.”

—oc rated: 3.5

“Loved this story on the aftermath of a failed relationship.”

—oc rated: 4.0

“Very well written.”

—SarahViecelli rated: 3.0

“needs some work”

—oddone rated: 2.0