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Family
“Cute story but could be developed further”
—naricorn rated: 3.0
“A nice reminiscence, but not a story.”
—cereed27 rated: 2.5
Bicicletas
By: Pastelwriting
May 23, 2019
Family Humor
My papa was unavailable, so it was up to Mama to teach me how to ride a bike for the day.
3 reviews
“Interesting character dynamics”
—van rated: 3.0
“A Lot of Potential - Just Insufficiently Fleshed Out”
—haeun_logos rated: 3.0
“Overall good, missing a lot tho”
—thelittlewolf45 rated: 3.0
Longing
By: Littlewolf95
Nov. 25, 2018
Family Fantasy Hurt/Comfort
An excerpt from a longer piece I am working on
7 reviews
“Heartrending narrative”
—hadiyyyah rated: 3.5
“Nicely crafted, nicely told”
—GeoB rated: 4.0
“Hard to Read (In the Best Way Possible)”
—haeun_logos rated: 4.5
The Loudest Voice
By: stantemdei
Feb. 1, 2019
Drama Family Hurt/Comfort
A daughter and a mute mother come to terms with their history | Rape of Nanjing and #metoo in China
6 reviews
“Lovely snapshot”
—naricorn rated: 3.5
“This Story Has Got Skillz”
—Flounce rated: 5.0
“This Story Has Got Skillz”
—Flounce rated: 5.0
Town Lake
By: cereed27
Nov. 12, 2018
Family
Father and son close distance with a lakeside walk and small-talk.
5 reviews
“Intro, voice and dialogue”
—slorence rated: 3.5
“Why is this story being told, and why is it being told now?”
—naricorn rated: 3.5
Its not that the children were bad
By: oddone
Oct. 14, 2019
Drama Family
A young governess, convinced that the children she watches is evil recounts their latest horror.
2 reviews
“Gorgeous. Brings new meaning to tough love.”
—naricorn rated: 4.5
“Hen hao”
—cereed27 rated: 5.0
“Heartwarming!”
—tangledcharms rated: 3.0
Middle Ground
By: kati.chen
June 10, 2019
Family
A narrator's relationship to her cultural identity and her mother, through the years.
8 reviews
“Again, needs concision and better grounding”
—naricorn rated: 2.5
“what's going on”
—van rated: 2.5
After Humanity---02: Alienated Earth
By: LightWorker
June 12, 2019
Adventure Family Fantasy Horror Sci-fi
It was on new years day, in the year 2020, when the world turned to dust and ashes.
2 reviews
“A moving perspective on American beauty”
—coffeespoons rated: 3.5
“Interesting perspective. Work on focus!”
—naricorn rated: 3.0
“Where Is The Story?”
—
[email protected]
rated: 1.5
Her Nose is Different from Her Nose
By: mariama16
June 19, 2019
Family General
“Her nose,” I pointed to the Nigerian woman, “is different from her nose!”
3 reviews
“Interesting idea!”
—beco99 rated: 3.0
“Royal confusion”
—metafrick rated: 3.0
“An Examination of Surprises”
—Flounce rated: 4.0
A Calico Prologue
By: laughing
Feb. 20, 2019
Family Fantasy
The Duchess gives birth. A pattern of mischief begins.
8 reviews
“Work on mechanics!”
—naricorn rated: 3.0
“your descriptions made me feel like I was in the forest with the beast”
—van rated: 3.0
“Content is good! Format is odd.”
—delpieman rated: 3.0
After Humanity---01: The Remnant
By: LightWorker
June 4, 2019
Adventure Family Fantasy Horror Sci-fi
It was on new years day, in the year 2020, when the world turned to dust and ashes.
4 reviews
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Devotion Jail
By: Daniel
June 13, 2019
Family
Mom is everything to everyone, until she's not. Then she has to crack open her own identity.
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