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Fantasy
“Decent start but needs a bit more...”
—darlingnell rated: 2.5
“Want more Darren”
—naricorn rated: 2.5
“Overall Thoughts”
—awkwardlyfloatingpan rated: 4.0
The Once Future King
By: JayWrites101
Nov. 21, 2018
Fantasy Supernatural
A half-demon explores the land of the Fae to resurrect King Arthur
4 reviews
“Worthy of Revisions”
—Flounce rated: 2.5
“Favorite”
—dayahorne rated: 3.5
“Nice Dialogue!”
—hesanid rated: 3.5
Dancing Alone Together
By: DrKinchi
Feb. 13, 2019
Fantasy Romance LGBTQ+
Everything's better when you're with someone you love. Even if you're just dancing alone, together.
6 reviews
“Want to know about the characters”
—van rated: 4.0
“Great flow”
—quinnm93 rated: 4.5
“Interesting world!”
—sam rated: 4.0
Golden Threads
By: an-author-in-progress
Nov. 21, 2018
Adventure Fantasy Supernatural
The only known fact about enigma is they latch onto deep desires and twist you into a monster.
5 reviews
“Interesting character dynamics”
—van rated: 3.0
“A Lot of Potential - Just Insufficiently Fleshed Out”
—haeun_logos rated: 3.0
“Overall good, missing a lot tho”
—thelittlewolf45 rated: 3.0
Longing
By: Littlewolf95
Nov. 25, 2018
Family Fantasy Hurt/Comfort
An excerpt from a longer piece I am working on
7 reviews
“ARGH THIS IS SO GOOD”
—scbonifaz rated: 4.5
“Plot twist”
—van rated: 3.5
The Final Act
By: nsimonyan
Nov. 22, 2018
Fantasy
Roman is a young opera singer trying to reclaim his voice in a time ruled by gods and monsters.
2 reviews
“Engaging voice”
—van rated: 4.0
“Good but needs some work”
—Rose_Platter rated: 3.0
“Interesting premise but a tad wordy”
—quinnm93 rated: 3.5
The Last Child of Kasai
By: Jackman
Nov. 21, 2018
Adventure Fantasy Suspense
When horrid truths come into light, his only solution seemed to be to give in and drown. Literally.
3 reviews
“Elegant images.”
—naricorn rated: 4.0
When The Blue Hour Strikes (CH. 1 Pt. 2)
By: Chrysalis
Aug. 19, 2019
Fantasy Romance
Two powerful, immortal races attempt to reach tenuous peace in the aftermath of a war.
1 reviews
“Great read but there is need to polish up the ending”
—SF07 rated: 4.0
“Love it”
—van rated: 5.0
“Has potential, develop characters!”
—naricorn rated: 3.0
Are We Winning?
By: LeviathanSoul
Nov. 26, 2018
Fantasy
An impromptu traveling company are followed along a dust road right into the maw of a beast.
5 reviews
“I have a soft spot for anything that involves fairies and selfish protagonists”
—van rated: 3.5
“Strong choreography of action but needs more momentum”
—naricorn rated: 3.5
“Great start!”
—beco99 rated: 4.0
Blackbird
By: kryon777
March 29, 2019
Fantasy
Caspian is the only hope for the Ten Realms
4 reviews
“Show Don't Tell, Kill Your Darlings, & Deepen Those Characters”
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rated: 2.0
“Absurd. What an imagination!”
—naricorn rated: 4.0
“Fewer characters please, but nice writing”
—michaelbotur rated: 3.0
Mother Only Wants the Best For You
By: g.o.b.
June 30, 2019
Fantasy
Mrs. Wren experiences a fundamental change
4 reviews
“Hello, Parade!”
—scbonifaz rated: 3.0
The Golden Warrior – Chapter One
By: thelittlewolf45
Nov. 28, 2018
Fantasy
Parade Franklin hasn't heard her actual name spoken in almost twenty name-days.
1 reviews
“intrigued!”
—sam rated: 4.0
“more world-building, great dialogue”
—van rated: 2.5
“Really great start!”
—enfiejian rated: 3.0
Attention of a Relic
By: Kitsy
Jan. 21, 2019
Adventure Fantasy
A woman seeks out an ancient being that can grant her a wish.
4 reviews
“Cute but a little befuddled”
—scbonifaz rated: 3.0
“Absurd and humorous!”
—naricorn rated: 3.0
“Witch and Visitor”
—Thedude3445 rated: 3.0
The Witch and the Visitor
By: procrastinator_extraordinaire
Nov. 27, 2018
Fantasy Humor LGBTQ+
A witch has an unexpected visitor [they/them] who suffers from loneliness & they help each other.
10 reviews
“Much potential”
—hadiyyyah rated: 3.0
“Interesting idea”
—GeoB rated: 1.0
“lyrical, beautiful, more conflict”
—van rated: 3.5
Greenlace
By: sam
Jan. 31, 2019
Fantasy
A woman finds herself in a world unlike her own and can't remember how she got there
4 reviews
“Very neat narration!”
—an-author-in-progress rated: 4.5
“Lovely prose, want to know more”
—whatdoyouneed rated: 3.0
Canary Song - Chapter 1
By: versesfortomorrow
Nov. 21, 2018
Fantasy
Elliot must deal with visions of an apocalyptic future in the wake of her best friend leaving town.
2 reviews
“Sparse details but an intriguing premise”
—beco99 rated: 3.0
The Reaper and the Witch
By: WITCHSTONES
March 12, 2020
Fantasy
In which a Reaper comes to the Forsaken Isles to kill a witch.
1 reviews
“A sensual, enchanting piece!”
—Hyba rated: 5.0
“otherworldly and ethereal”
—van rated: 4.0
“Beautiful descriptions but don't go overboard!”
—naricorn rated: 4.0
When The Blue Hour Strikes (CH. 1 Pt. 1)
By: Chrysalis
Aug. 17, 2019
Fantasy Romance
Two powerful, immortal races attempt to reach tenuous peace in the aftermath of a war.
3 reviews
“Lush, vivid descriptions”
—authortessagray rated: 3.5
“You Got Me Hooked”
—jbrown rated: 5.0
“Good Start!”
—Chrysalis rated: 3.5
The Bane of The Damned
By: srose12
Nov. 28, 2018
Drama Fantasy
An assassin with a troubled past has to face his demons as they collide with his current assignment.
8 reviews
“Again, needs concision and better grounding”
—naricorn rated: 2.5
“what's going on”
—van rated: 2.5
After Humanity---02: Alienated Earth
By: LightWorker
June 12, 2019
Adventure Family Fantasy Horror Sci-fi
It was on new years day, in the year 2020, when the world turned to dust and ashes.
2 reviews
“Really interesting world but too much info-dumping while still leaving questions unanswered.”
—oc rated: 3.0
The Invitation
By: ElementZeroth
Nov. 18, 2019
Fantasy
First impressions mean everything.
1 reviews
“Work on mechanics!”
—naricorn rated: 3.0
“your descriptions made me feel like I was in the forest with the beast”
—van rated: 3.0
“Content is good! Format is odd.”
—delpieman rated: 3.0
After Humanity---01: The Remnant
By: LightWorker
June 4, 2019
Adventure Family Fantasy Horror Sci-fi
It was on new years day, in the year 2020, when the world turned to dust and ashes.
4 reviews
“Interesting idea!”
—beco99 rated: 3.0
“Royal confusion”
—metafrick rated: 3.0
“An Examination of Surprises”
—Flounce rated: 4.0
A Calico Prologue
By: laughing
Feb. 20, 2019
Family Fantasy
The Duchess gives birth. A pattern of mischief begins.
8 reviews
“Concept is there, needs a few read-throughs”
—dvillene rated: 2.5
“there is a lot going on”
—oddone rated: 2.0
VOYANT
By: AnastasiaPasechnik
Aug. 27, 2019
Adventure Fantasy
In a land ruled by a tyrant, Elaine, a young captive girl, can't help but wonder about her past.
2 reviews
“Loved the Descriptions!”
—Team_Vega rated: 3.5
She who bears the Mark- Chapter One
By: SarahViecelli
Aug. 29, 2019
Adventure Fantasy
Sha'ara, her vision, and the Shia'din?
1 reviews
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Lifeblood - Chapter 1
By: GoldenPersonality
June 10, 2020
Adventure Fantasy
A Shifter's blood is more coveted than gold. Unfortunately, all Shifters have been dead for years.
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“It's on the way to greatness!”
—cellerdweller2 rated: 3.5
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—whatdoyouneed rated: 3.0
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—whatdoyouneed rated: 3.0
Early Adopter
By: whatdoyouneed
June 14, 2020
Fantasy Sci-fi
Escaping was the easy part. The real question is, what comes after?
1 reviews
“Interesting start!”
—beco99 rated: 3.5
“Interesting start but be more concise!”
—naricorn rated: 3.0
“I'm interested in what this is leading up to”
—van rated: 3.5
After Humanity---00: Lost Origins
By: LightWorker
May 27, 2019
Adventure Fantasy Romance Sci-fi
It was on new years day, in the year 2020, when the world turned to dust and ashes.
5 reviews
“great!”
—manaaar. rated: 4.0
“More?”
—dvillene rated: 3.0
“Short”
—gamila.walrus rated: 3.0
She who bears the Mark- Prologue
By: SarahViecelli
Aug. 28, 2019
Adventure Fantasy
Sha'ara is a normal 15 year old girl, untill a voice informs her that she bears The Mark.
4 reviews
