“Lots of potential, though a bit slow to start”

—naricorn rated: 4.0

“Great Introduction to Characters”

—versesfortomorrow rated: 4.5

“Absolutely Fantastic”

—AudreySarah rated: 5.0

“Grabs your attention!”

—naricorn rated: 3.0

“A Little Convoluted, but Has Lots of Promise!”

—haeun_logos rated: 2.5

“Interesting premise!”

—LoseThatLeftSock rated: 3.5

“Interesting stream of thought but lacks clarity”

—beco99 rated: 2.5

“Work on vagueness”

—naricorn rated: 2.0

“Interesting start!”

—beco99 rated: 3.5

“Interesting start but be more concise!”

—naricorn rated: 3.0

“I'm interested in what this is leading up to”

—van rated: 3.5