“I'm interested, but some repetition, and I need to understand the protagonist better.”

—naricorn rated: 3.5

“so many possibilities”

—van rated: 3.0

“Interesting concept, needs a little work”

—beco99 rated: 3.0

“Very interesting!”

—scbonifaz rated: 3.5

“I need to understand these characters better.”

—naricorn rated: 3.5

“Grabs your attention!”

—naricorn rated: 3.0

“A Little Convoluted, but Has Lots of Promise!”

—haeun_logos rated: 2.5

“Interesting premise!”

—LoseThatLeftSock rated: 3.5

“A little cliche, but I'd love to read more”

—van rated: 2.5

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“Interesting in some parts”

—whatdoyouneed rated: 3.0

“Villainous main character? Interesting power? I'm in (but please work on the pacing).”

—nenatia rated: 3.0

“the plot has taken an interesting turn”

—nenatia rated: 4.0

“Imaginative potential but also could be clearer”

—naricorn rated: 3.5

“Cliff-hanger alert”

—dvillene rated: 4.0

“PLEASE don't leave it here.”

—oc rated: 5.0

“Vivid descriptions and shocking horror!”

—beco99 rated: 4.5

“Interesting idea”

—oddone rated: 3.0

“Did NOT see that coming.”

—naricorn rated: 4.0

“Seriously, how do you come up with cliffhangers like this?”

—nenatia rated: 3.5

“Cool concept but would like more direction”

—naricorn rated: 3.5

“beautiful descriptions that need a point”

—van rated: 3.0

“Keep it Coming”

—cereed27 rated: 4.0

“Again, needs concision and better grounding”

—naricorn rated: 2.5

“what's going on”

—van rated: 2.5

“Work on mechanics!”

—naricorn rated: 3.0

“your descriptions made me feel like I was in the forest with the beast”

—van rated: 3.0

“Content is good! Format is odd.”

—delpieman rated: 3.0