“Leaner prose for better pacing”

—naricorn rated: 3.0

“A strong premise”

—whatdoyouneed rated: 3.0

“I just wanted a little more”

—lgghosts rated: 3.0

“Decent start but needs a bit more...”

—darlingnell rated: 2.5

“Want more Darren”

—naricorn rated: 2.5

“Overall Thoughts”

—awkwardlyfloatingpan rated: 4.0

“need more”

—van rated: 4.0

“Nice beginning, end is jarring”

—naricorn rated: 3.5

“@van”

—Kitsy rated: 3.0

“Strong piece, I loved it! I suggest you cut down on adverbs and reconsider the ending.”

—AdventureRanger rated: 4.5

“Reminds me of Poe or Stevenson”

—nenatia rated: 2.5

“Great sense of story and setting”

—darlingnell rated: 4.0

“I want to read this again and again”

—van rated: 4.5

“Slightly surreal, definitely intriguing, and very well-written.”

—Hyba rated: 4.0

“Unique, humorous read”

—naricorn rated: 4.0

“Not an avid reader of supernatural but I LOVED this.”

—naricorn rated: 4.5

“i didn't know i could love a character that hasn't even been introduced yet but here we are”

—nenatia rated: 4.0

“Loved it! Super fun tale”

—tangledcharms rated: 4.5

“Lovely diction. Not convinced of turning point.”

—naricorn rated: 4.0