“Gruesome descriptions! The story can be tightened, though.”

—naricorn rated: 3.5

“Legitimate horror concepts, held back by grammatical errors”

—dvillene rated: 3.0

“Chilling Concept”

—Chrysalis rated: 4.0

“a modern step in the right direction”

—IssachartheVisayan rated: 4.0

“An unsettling piece with the potential to be even more so!”

—beco99 rated: 3.5

“Think some more about the POV.”

—naricorn rated: 3.0

“things are picking up!”

—van rated: 3.0

“Amazing descriptions, so don't read this while eating”

—van rated: 4.0

“Extremely well-written but it was too predictable.”

—naricorn rated: 4.0

“Solid story, great to read! Twists could be better, though”

—tangledcharms rated: 3.5

“Not an avid reader of supernatural but I LOVED this.”

—naricorn rated: 4.5

“i didn't know i could love a character that hasn't even been introduced yet but here we are”

—nenatia rated: 4.0

“Loved it! Super fun tale”

—tangledcharms rated: 4.5

“Show Don't Tell, Kill Your Darlings, & Deepen Those Characters”

—[email protected] rated: 2.0

“Absurd. What an imagination!”

—naricorn rated: 4.0

“Fewer characters please, but nice writing”

—michaelbotur rated: 3.0