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date (newest) rating (highest)
“Has potential but needs character consistency”
—naricorn rated: 3.0
“Fun and crazy, in the best way”
—van rated: 3.5
Saul Bites People
By: themartpuniste
spark character
May 10, 2019
Mystery Supernatural
After dying through the hand of a mysterious gunman, a new vampire attampts to solve his own murder.
2 reviews
“Feels disconnected from the first chapter”
—naricorn rated: 1.5
“interesting idea, reconsider execution”
—van rated: 1.5
The Secrets of Camelot - Chapter two
By: Rose_Platter
spark character
May 1, 2019
Adventure LGBTQ+
In Camelot, secrets tend to come out, but what if a secret could put the entire kingdom in danger?
2 reviews
“Driving tests have never been so terrifying. I physically recoiled, great job.”
—nenatia rated: 4.5
“Paula Dean and the DMV”
—mstabel rated: 3.0
“Well-written and horrifying as intended”
—naricorn rated: 4.0
Paula Dean and the DMV
By: amandat
spark character
April 30, 2019
Horror Humor
A young woman attempts to take her driver's test but faces a proctor who is not who she seems to be.
6 reviews
“Cool concept but would like more direction”
—naricorn rated: 3.5
“beautiful descriptions that need a point”
—van rated: 3.0
“Keep it Coming”
—cereed27 rated: 4.0
Grapeshot - Prologue
By: Goomba
spark character
April 29, 2019
Adventure Sci-fi
First draft of a prologue to a story about a human effort to escape their dying planet
3 reviews
“Tough Genre to Fill”
—mythgrrl rated: 2.0
“New Take on the Arthurian Legend”
—amandat rated: 3.0
“Flesh out the scenes and characters”
—naricorn rated: 2.0
The Secrets of Camelot - Chapter one
By: Rose_Platter
spark character
April 23, 2019
Adventure LGBTQ+
In Camelot, secrets tend to come out, but what if a secret could put the entire kingdom in danger?
4 reviews
“Unsure at first but has potential”
—naricorn rated: 2.5
“Interesting concept, lots of exposition”
—whatdoyouneed rated: 2.0
Bangers and Mash
By: beco99
spark character
April 21, 2019
Drama Humor Sci-fi
Bangers and Mash have the power to party.
2 reviews
“Experimental and curious but needs more clarity!”
—naricorn rated: 2.0
“Interesting and emotional but I would like to see more personality”
—Daniel rated: 3.0
She Died
By: RavenUnlikeaWritingDesk
spark character
April 18, 2019
Hurt/Comfort
A man rationalizes the death of his girlfriend.
2 reviews
“Too Vague”
—Jude_M_Eriksen rated: 2.0
“Absolutely Breathtaking”
—RavenUnlikeaWritingDesk rated: 5.0
“Nice start but want to know more”
—naricorn rated: 2.5
Lost at Sea
By: DevG94
spark character
April 17, 2019
Horror Suspense
A man searches for meaning while stranded in open water.
3 reviews
“Villainous main character? Interesting power? I'm in (but please work on the pacing).”
—nenatia rated: 3.0
Jonny and The Doctor
By: beco99
spark character
April 14, 2019
Drama Sci-fi
Can Jonny's unusual power save him from his fate?
1 reviews
“Character interactions spot-on, real, and entertaining. But focus on comma usage”
—van rated: 3.0
Chapter 2 - The Misadventures of the Adventure Rangers
By: AdventureRanger
spark character
April 10, 2019
Adventure Humor
A few young Adventure Rangers try to survive the car ride to Camp Winnebago
1 reviews
“Strong piece, I loved it! I suggest you cut down on adverbs and reconsider the ending.”
—AdventureRanger rated: 4.5
“Reminds me of Poe or Stevenson”
—nenatia rated: 2.5
“Great sense of story and setting”
—darlingnell rated: 4.0
The Strange Case of Darius Scott
By: NaliWrites
spark character
April 9, 2019
Horror Supernatural
a arrogant young man gets more than he bargains for
3 reviews
“Lots of potential but could start more quickly”
—naricorn rated: 3.5
“solid character relationships but put more focus on pacing”
—van rated: 2.5
Chapter 1 - The Misadventures of the Adventure Rangers
By: AdventureRanger
spark character
April 3, 2019
Adventure Humor
A few young Adventure Rangers enjoy their last night of gaming before heading off to summer camp
3 reviews